Penning Something (Part III)

I'm gonna re-insert the pre-chorus. So the song goes like this:

"Empty"

Verse 1:

You broke my heart

Tore it apart

And you left me

Down and weary

Said goodbye

And I can't try

To keep you with me

Why'd you leave me

Pre-chorus:

I'm falling apart

I told you from the start

Chorus:

I can't live live live

Live without you

I can't breathe breathe breathe

Breathe without you

Now you take away my love

You take away my happy

I can't see see see

See without you

I can't think think think

Think without you

Now you take away my soul

You take away my hope

And I'm empty

Verse 2:

For a while

Forget us now

That's what you told me

I am sorry

I held you near

Whispered in your ear

Oh L-O-V-E

Why can't you see

Pre-chorus (x1)

Chorus (x1)

Bridge:

Empty, empty, empty, empty

Empty, empty, my heart is empty

Empty, empty, empty, empty

Empty, empty, now I'm empty

Chorus (x1)

So there you have it! My very first self-penned song. Overall, it has something of a Power Pop/Rock vibe with an acoustic guitar introduction, which later incorporates drum beats for the second verse. Think of Kelly Clarkson's "My Life Would Suck Without You" mixed with Leona Lewis' "I Got You" and "Naked".

Well, I wouldn't call this song a masterpiece, because I still think the lyrics are quite cheesy. But for a first attempt, I should give myself a pat on the back. :)

I wanna write something R&B next! Haha.